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That Girl by ~FallenAngelWolfy:iconFallenAngelWolfy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open




I watched myself broken on the floor
My life passing in flashes.

See that girl?
That girl pouring her heart out to a journal?
That's me.
Telling the only friend I have.

See that girl?
That girl with blood seeping from her veins?
That's me.
Trying to feel alive.

See that girl?
That girl hating herself into oblivion?
That was me.
Not too long ago.

See that girl?
That girl starting to heal?
That's me.
Right now.
©2007-2009 ~FallenAngelWolfy
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Author's Comments

I don't know where this came from to be honest.
I haven't written anything in a long time.

Comments


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~zippysaysROAR Oct 8, 2007, 4:49:38 PM
thats really good, i really like it. it has a ton of feeling
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~jaraku Oct 8, 2007, 4:56:48 PM
I love it... I really truly do and I knew you'd come around. *hugs and kisses*

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Like a captain aboard ship, I will go down with my art.
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~FallenAngelWolfy Oct 8, 2007, 5:00:20 PM
thanks so much =]

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today begins my walk with you. where you go, i go. where you stay, i stay. when you sleep, i sleep. when you rise, i rise. i will pass my days within the sound of your voice, my nights within the reach of your hand, and none can come between us.
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Mood: Thanks ~FallenAngelWolfy Oct 8, 2007, 5:03:42 PM
Haha.

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today begins my walk with you. where you go, i go. where you stay, i stay. when you sleep, i sleep. when you rise, i rise. i will pass my days within the sound of your voice, my nights within the reach of your hand, and none can come between us.
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~zippysaysROAR Oct 8, 2007, 5:06:15 PM
have you done anything else like this?
i really like the way you had her(you) going through her problems and then resolving it, that's pretty hard to do and make it sound good
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~FallenAngelWolfy Oct 8, 2007, 5:11:18 PM
Actually thats the first poem I've done like that. It's the first thing I've written in a long time. I dunno, I'm just in a writing mood, ya know?

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Without you I'll be miserable at best.
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~zippysaysROAR Oct 8, 2007, 5:20:34 PM
lucky! that stupid guy "Writers Block" tied my key board in a knot. what a jerk huh?
but yeah, thats really good, and i would love to read anything else you've written
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~FallenAngelWolfy Oct 8, 2007, 5:24:45 PM
Thanks so much. I dunno, I don't really think a lot of my stuff is all that good. It's just what I feel.

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Without you I'll be miserable at best.
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